Notes by: Adam Harper
Date: 4th August 2024
Writer(s): Steven Knight
Pages: 64
Genre: Drama, Thriller
Score Card
| | Plot | Characters | Tone | Writing |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Score | 4.5 | 4.5 | 5 | 4 |
Overall Score: 4.5
Plot Analysis
Episode 1 of Peaky Blinders opens with a bang, seamlessly introducing us to the gritty world of the Shelby’s and their various schemes.
The pacing is well-calibrated, as the show presents a multitude of characters without overwhelming us, hinting at the intertwining storylines that will keep us glued to the screen. It’s clear from the start that viewers should buckle up for an intriguing ride, complete with metaphorical fireworks.
The introduction of Inspector Campbell and Grace is central to this episode, setting the stage for the ongoing conflict between their plans and the Shelby clan’s ambitions.
The mix of smaller, developing plots and looming showdowns keeps the narrative ticking along nicely, maintaining its cool, wit, and intrigue.
Character Analysis
Thomas Shelby’s reputation precedes him, and this episode does a fantastic job of showcasing his mystique and calculating nature. Even without prior knowledge of the show, the writing makes his complex character apparent. While the characters may initially appear bit of a cliched mobster, this fits the genre perfectly.
As the series progresses, their depth unfolds through their decisions and the history that shapes them—a testament to solid storytelling.
For aspiring screenwriters, it’s a reminder of the limited time to establish characters in a pilot episode. The script skillfully introduces each character without making the task feel daunting, avoiding the chaos of a single overwhelming group introduction. And let’s not forget the dialogue: Tommy’s verbal sparring with Polly, Arthur, and Freddie delivers truly satisfying scenes.
The characters are diverse and compelling—Tommy with his enigmatic allure, Campbell with his ruthless determination, and Grace, seemingly too kind for such a harsh world. Despite following the bad guys, the show captures Birmingham’s eclectic and diverse spirit.
Tone Analysis
The world of Peaky Blinders is vividly defined, and for someone from the Black Country, it’s refreshing to see local dialects authentically represented.
The script paints a gritty picture of the slums and the era, where humor is present but overshadowed by a dark, unredeeming narrative—a fitting choice when the protagonists are criminals.
I didn’t fully appreciate just how cool Thomas Shelby’s lines are until seeing them on the page. His witty one-liners are a highlight, showcasing a complex character who is as likable as he is morally ambiguous. He’s not pure evil; he’s a businessman with twisted ethics.
The show also weaves in hints of spirituality and diverse beliefs, adding depth to the narrative.
Writing Analysis
The script uses specific time markers in scene headers and is jam-packed with action lines, telling stories beyond dialogue.
While these action lines are exciting, there’s a risk of overwriting, given the 64-page script for a 60-minute episode. Yet, Steven Knight’s established screenwriting clout allows him to bend the rules a bit. His writing exudes a certain coolness, balancing extensive action with world-building and story progression.
Knight’s voice is a stylized blueprint, doing exactly what a script should without unnecessary flair. Interestingly, he occasionally includes insights that aren’t strictly filmable, like suggesting past connections between characters.
This approach, often discouraged, gives directors and actors the freedom to explore and interpret these nuances. The script’s excessive page count partly stems from its formatting quirks—scenes omitted on pages 24A and 31A leave significant blank space, a luxury not typical in spec scripts.
Summary / Feedback
As a local, I initially found Peaky Blinders somewhat underwhelming. The actors’ struggles with the dialect and my hunt for familiar locations distracted me from the show’s themes.
However, revisiting the script has renewed my appreciation for the writing’s quality. It reminds me of the massive set pieces and shocking twists that define later seasons. L
The series raises stakes similarly to Breaking Bad, leaving you questioning the characters’ fate, much like Game of Thrones or The Sopranos.
I’ve come to rate and admire Peaky Blinders far more than I expected. Despite my gripes with the merchandise, I’m warming up to the haircuts. And as I age—and now live in Yorkshire—I find the appeal of a flat cap growing. Minus the razor blades, of course.